I might add something like this to that second to last paragraph.

‘We respect Mr. Lucas’ decision to present these films as he intends and do not ask for the current versions to be removed but restoring the theatrical cuts that changed cinema forever would be a delight both to fans and cinema history itself.’

You guys could probably word that better but you get my point. I might also throw in something that there’s also generations who may not have seen the originals theatrically but grew up with those versions on home video and as such has just an importance to them as to those who had seen them theatrically.

Those aside I like where the letters going. Yeah maybe reword the ‘wink wink’ at the fan edits but for the most part good work. Can’t wait for your next draft!