I like the letter very much, but I also worry it’s a bit too long. I always learned you should use three paragraphs in a letter:
- Introduction
- State problem
- State solution
You should have seen my first draft. 😉
What I’m trying to do is make an impassioned polite plea here. (I don’t want to be cold and clinical.) Disney ought to know we care about Star Wars, but reiterating why these versions mean so much can’t hurt.
I think it’s a manageable length at the moment. Any open letter is going to seem long winded in the age of 140 character limits. The 40th is pretty much the last occasion we can make an appeal to the powers that be, and get as many eyeballs on it as we can. So, we throw the kitchen sink in and hope for the best.