I’m incredibly surprised that you left in the “Oh look! There’s Captain Solo!” line, but you cut out 3P0 wanting to leave early.
I cut out 3po wanting to leave early because I know it was supposed to be humorous to have him knock and then give up after less than a second, but I just thought it was annoying.
I had the “Captain Solo” line removed originally, but I put it back in because with the crowd laughter also removed it was much too quick of a scene change, and if I have to keep one the 3p0 line is much less annoying than salacious crumb.