It’s funny because that scene in my edit is almost half the duration of the original, if we count from the moment the first lightsaber slices a droid to when they deactivate the lightsabers. (27 seconds vs 14 seconds). I guess I could try to make that shorter, I just don’t know where.

If you want to know where the edits are in the rest of the intro up to Grevious’s first appearance:

I changed “Master” to “Obi Wan”
Cut “crawling with buzz droids”
Added “General Skywalker, ready to engage” from a clone as they get into position
“I’m gonna go help him out” exhange cut
Cut “Missiles!”
Cut “Buzz droids…”
Cut Obi Wan recapping the mission before “we’re running out of tricks here.”
Cut “Hold your fire, you’re not helping” and “You’re right, bad idea” exchange
Cut Obi Wan telling Anakin to go on without him and “Not leaving without you, master”
Cut “You’re going to get us both killed” from Obi Wan
Replaced R2 scream with more neutral R2 noises
Cut “The shields are still up!” exhange
Cut Obi Wan leap out of fighter
Cut R2 leap from fighter
Silenced droids
Cut extra shots of them just slicing droids
Cut “I sense Count Dooku”
Cut “Stay with the ship” exchange with R2
Cut “Just as Count Dooku predicted” from Grevious

It’s at this point most people check out, because I kept in (an edited down version of, at least) the elevator sequence and even added more banter between O/A.