Sure, I can render a clip! I takes a while, so it might be better to save it for later in case you decide to change the text again. But I might render it anyway, I’ll link it here if I do.
I think technically my version looks a bit closer to the original one (after all, they used After Effects for the TFA crawl). I closely matched things such as the blur on the text in the distance.
http://i.imgur.com/3KBqQuu.png
I changed the font of the title to match the crawls of VI and I-III but I might change it back to the original again (IV, V, VII) as they will probably keep that one going forward.
Hi i have started a private topic about your opening crawl because right now i am also making a fan film and i need good accurate Star Wars Crawl Template from After Effects.