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Post #1067263

Author
Sir Ridley
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
18-Apr-2017, 5:19 AM

Great idea! I don’t think the execution is perfect yet, but the idea totally works. There’s a couple of things that bother me. First the film grain on the background image of the desert, you can tell it’s a still frame. Preferably the grain should be removed from the background layer. And second I think the horizons should be aligned so it feels more like the sand turns into water instead of the island and ocean floating above everything else.