“breakdown” of your third edit, Children of the Force. Very fun to rewatch, I didn’t like it at first because I don’t like Bane’s plots but in this context with a few silly things removed and a fast-paced narrative it really works very well.

Here are a few suggestions (not that much since you’ve improved with each new installment of your Clone Wars movies series) that could, IMHO, improve some parts:

Crawl:
Missing “…” at the end of the text.

Audio glitches (4):

around 0:15:12
around 0:57:30 (“the separatist brought tanks to exterminate us”)
around 1:12:01 (“more freedom than I should have”)
around 2:14:13

Useless/repetitive dialogues (3):

at 0:43:34, the droid lines are repetitive:
“Sergent, the attack is coming. Prepare for the final attack.”
Maybe you should correct it as simply: “Sergent, prepare for the final attack.” ?
at 02:00:08, Admiral Yularen who doesn’t react quickly to Anakin’s urgent order is something I would suggest to remove: “What happened since the last time we spoke”
at 2:14:50: “I’m afraid this installation is lost.” (it’s repetitive with the other dialogues)

Plot issues (2):

at 01:11:32, during the Ahsoka library assignement scene, there is a line that betrays the scene was taken from another story arc:
“is the description of the incident by Obi-Wan accurate ?”. I think you can remove it and the scene would still be understandable. Or just remove the fact Obi-Wan has described an accident he wasn’t even there to witness, like: “Is the description of the accident accurate ?” to imply that Anakin is the one who told how it happened.
the Anakin saving the day scene at the senate should be move a little bit forward, after Bane has begun his entrance into the Temple. That’s way it’s more clear for the audience that the senate crisis is a decoy, a deception. Otherwise we don’t quite see the point of such an operation.

Other suggestions:

at 1:18:00, unecessary violence when the senate guard is killed (“help me !”)

Anyway, here is a french subtitles file synchonized to your cut: https://mega.nz/#!wx0gRAQK!CRHJ7BNceK1PdBbOnNqdaZaJ9KnkytvbDJyU6tF75Gw