I’ve taken out Tatooine… works much better now. Vader also now says “Send a detachment to retrieve them.” instead of “Send a detachment DOWN to retrieve them.”
(still needs to be fine-tuned, but gets the idea across)
Very nicely done.
What version of the Imperial March did you use when for when Vader boards the Tantive and assesses the aftermath?
It’s an excerpt from “Krennic’s Aspirations” from the RO Soundtrack (from 2:05-2:15)