This edit keeps looking more and more promising.
Only thing I’ll say is (if you cut it before and have the line at your disposal) I’d change the fireships line to "we’re on your tail general Skywalker "
Post #1054124
- Author
- Mithrandir
- Parent topic
- Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut) [ON HOLD INDEFINITELY]
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1054124/action/topic#1054124
- Date created
- 9-Mar-2017, 11:02 AM