This is my “WORK IN PROGRESS” for my custom set for the Despecialized Editions. This is just the “Insert” for Star Wars (1977). I’m giving my set a bronze/sepia color scheme.
That is a really interesting take, I like it. If I may put my two cents in, I think if you went with the font and colors like the film for “A long time ago…” and the crawl, they would really pop on that background.