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Post #1042474

Author
NeverarGreat
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
1-Feb-2017, 8:36 PM

It’s good. 😃

@sirRidley, yes, the Poe was in motion during ‘weapon’, so there’s little I could do to make that sharper. I tried to make ‘the weapon’ into ‘a weapon’, but it sounded unnatural and I realized that he basically does say ‘a’ since the ‘th’ part is blended with the ‘with’ sound.