Sweet! This just happen to pop up in my recommended videos yesterday, very cool Blackout. It shows how I really needed to bring the brightness down a hair more (and the saturation level a bit as well with that brightness) but I’m still pleased with the overall improvement.
I think it’s a nice job. I do think you need more blue in some capacity in there though and there is a value issue there too.
Those strip lights in the falcon cockpit they are not ever meant to be cyan. At least “I don’t think they are” so it may mean you have too lower value and a bit of color missing in the mid range for which would probably fall on red as you have the cyan strip light.
Just saying I do think it looks nice though but it’s still got something missing, but I would say you are close to getting there and you are definitely heading in the right direction.