Your latest version seems to be overdoing it so unless something more accurate but as short as the “return to power” can be found I’d go with that.

And I’d cut the “her brother’s” in the third paragraph. I can’t tell why, but it feels out of place to me and since the crawl ends on the fact that she’s looking for Luke, I don’t think it is necessary to mention him twice in the paragraph.

@ NeverarGreat: That’s actually pretty good! I’d definetly remove the wipes as they just don’t belong there (we have neither a transition in time nor in space), but the way you put together those two deleted scenes makes them work really well. Maybe it’d work better after Finn and Poe’s reunion but I’m not sure without seeing it placed there.