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Post #1040472

Author
Hal 9000
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
28-Jan-2017, 8:12 AM

I could perhaps resolve the problem of correct grammar implying that the FO once held power with this:
“Luke Skywalker has vanished. In his absence, the sinister FIRST ORDER has risen in secret from the remnants of the fallen Empire, plotting their return to power.”

It is too much of a stretch to describe “ashes” as plotting “their” return to power, but perhaps “remnants” would work.