I don’t think it’s entirely out of place, but it doesn’t work well at the end. I made a mockup of how this scene might end differently, but it’s definitely outside the scope of this edit:
https://mega.nz/#!HN9U0DbA!Rf6CCKIlVMGYasEtMUv2MDXHRZitSEqaHQMRmjSrqEQ
Ah, thanks for that NeverarGreat, nicely done! - over on the TFA fan edit ideas thread I described how I’d prefer to swap the ‘helicopter shot’ over with the final close-ups of Luke or Rey too, and it’s neat to see that it works perfectly. 😃
I don’t know if anyone else will end up using this particular tweak for their final TFA scene or not, but if I was to include the ‘island’ meeting sequence at all (depending on how THE LAST JEDI starts), then this is definately the way I’d choose to do it - some might prefer to have Luke as the final close-up instead of Rey, which would work well too…but I think that Rey’s earned the final shot due to this movie being about her eventful journey to this point, and the fact that I like her momentary, detemined look as the end credits begin.