Lot better. I say still be careful with the levels on the destruction before they leave the planet (sounds like it might be clipping?), little loud.

I’d still advocate strongly for the original placement of the Falcon door sound. Sounds like that don’t necessarily make sense when you think about them, but that’s how sound mixers work. I’ve seen the film about ten times and never once questioned why Chewie didn’t leave the door open, because it just sounded right in the moment. And then, when I watched your version, the silence of them running to the Falcon felt uncomfortable. Sound mixing is very much based on feelings rather than rational thought (same reason Indiana Jones’s revolver sounds like a rifle). At the end of the day, in my mind, these people who made the mix are professionals who know this kind of work far better than I do. I personally think it’s better to refer to their judgement rather than second guess it.