https://vimeo.com/201235779
Password: sound

Okay, I’ve addressed the following issues:

I think you can probably do a bit of a crossfade when Rey cries over Finn between the existing music and the new (rather than simply dropping out the existing music entirely)

missing the sound as Rey drops on Finn

bit of a rough audio edit when we cut to the closeup of the cockpit

when they’re running to the Falcon, missing the sound of the Falcon door opening (and then the hiss when they’re boarding)

missing the sound of the Falcon revving up when Finn is placed on the med bed

also notice in the film how the sounds of the destruction of the planet slowly start to become louder as the Falcon takes off - rather than begin loud immediately at the start of the shot

also the explosion sounds are sort of overpowering the music here, careful with that (explosions were definitely secondary to the music in the film’s mix)

The Falcon ramp sound doesn’t make much sense in its original placement, since I doubt Chewie would take the time to close the door behind him just to open it up moments later - after all, time is of the essence. I’ve placed it inside the Falcon, so presumably Rey is closing the door behind her. Since she is now at the door, it doesn’t make sense to have the Falcon revving sound since nobody is in the cockpit.
I’ll probably try to incorporate a bit more of your suggestions before final render as well.