Post #1039665

Author: Kexikus
Parent topic: TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1039665/action/topic#1039665
Date created: 26-Jan-2017, 12:06 PM

Damn, I liked the first version of your new crawl and then Sir Ridley came along and pointed out that it was implying that Leia knows about SKB… This is a good point though since your second paragraph bascially makes it impossible to mention SKB in the first one. Not sure what to do about this since I don’t want to loose your second paragraph^^