Here’s my ideal version of that scene without the pilot celebrations. It’s music only at this point, but I’ve also removed the lightsaber pickup shot because it feels like a prequelism.
https://vimeo.com/200626043
password: music
You know: I’m very fond of removing the sounds effets here. Williams’s cue is sort of “mickeymousing” what’s going on screen, so it works and it does justice to the score which is not in competition with sound effets.