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Post #1036204

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Sir Ridley
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
19-Jan-2017, 5:15 PM

MalàStrana said:

I guess since Poe is mentionned it’s about time to also talk about the ending, when SKB is destroyed. I would then suggest again to get rid of all the cheers scenes and to directly cut to the bitter scene at the Resistance H.Q. So no “our job here is done” and no “Leia hugs Rey while Chewie is vanishing in the background”.

In my version I’ve done exactly this. “Our work here is done” is cut, and the Leia hug has been cropped to hide Chewie.