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Post #1033953

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darth_ender
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Posts in this thread must be written in passive voice
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Date created
14-Jan-2017, 8:28 PM

Warbler said:

darth_ender said:

You will not be saved by appeals to my musical sensibilities. You will be punished! You will be taken on a ship, on a long, long trip, your lips close to my lips. You will be shown the world in my eyes

Warbler is confused.

As ‘confused’ can be read as either a noun or verb in this case, it is recommended that you follow with a ‘by’ phrase here. You were nearly reported!