Your first sentence was well-written. The second one was, unfortunately, written in active voice. The rules were broken, and you have been reported, sir.
Post #1033618
- Author
- darth_ender
- Parent topic
- Posts in this thread must be written in passive voice
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1033618/action/topic#1033618
- Date created
- 14-Jan-2017, 1:16 AM