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Post #1033273

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Kexikus
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
13-Jan-2017, 3:25 AM

NeverarGreat said:

That’s the thing though: Kylo’s shuttle ISN’T the first ship to leave the Finalizer, it is implied that the other ships were launched first and approached stealthily from a different direction while the shuttle approaches under the auspices of peaceful negotiation. The TIEs would still arrive first and wreak havoc as in the final film.

With this idea, I’m just reconciling the fact that the TIE fighters and landing craft seem to approach the castle low and from over the forest with the fact that in this edit, the Finalizer is almost directly overhead or at least over the lake somewhere. In every version of this edit, there is a slight continuity error because of these facts, which this idea solves.

And as I said, the current version doesn’t have any outstanding problems (apart from Finn’s line change which I assume will be in version 2), however with this idea there is no need for the patrons to flee at all, since the shuttle flanked by two tie fighters would not be seen as a hostile action.

Okay, I get it now. That version would definetly need the original cut order we had but if someone could make the effects for it I’d definetly be interested in seeing it. Still not sure if it’d work better but trying won’t hurt 😃