The new Boyega line works surprisingly well. Not perfect, but close.
I think the music you’ve put in is a big mistake though, as that exact music is used minutes later in that exact scene.
If the new music seems perfect and irreplaceable, we could probably replace it’s later appearance pretty easily.
Sure, but wouldn’t that just create the same problem but in a different spot? Not sure how the new music would be more perfect and irreplaceable than the existing use of the same music in the film as is.