I improved it! I fixed the volume dip (thank you ForceGhostRecon), mixed better (thank you MalàStrana) with more tie sounds, and added a new score (thank you Kexikus). There’s still room for tweaks and fine tuning but I think it works much better already! Take a look:
Man, you’re good ! With the new sfx shots the restructure is going to be as seamless as it can be. I might actually want to watch TFA again in this form (and a few other trims will be very much welcome as well).