^It might work well if the entire line was dubbed, but since it’s just a section, I can definitely hear the edit.

I’m not sure how to fix this scene. I’ve just finished a very rough animatic for the sort of thing I was imagining some pages earlier with the damaged spaceship, but I’m still not completely happy with the idea. I think there’s still too much being changed when the optimal answer would be something simple.

I don’t like the idea of Han and company seeing TIE fighters in the sky and ignoring them for another scene, nor do I particularly like introducing another spaceship only to have it be destroyed, since that entails a lot of effects work. Anyway, here’s the animatic if anyone is interested:

https://mega.nz/#!mRFzTLzT!_sU9oHbMQr9-ZzMKWXKflhCxF_biyI0K_xAsQhUOtIQ