The biggest thing that prevents this edit from working for me is the “It’s the First Order, they’ve done it” moment. Not just Finn’s dialogue but the music. It’s the tragic violin Starkiller Base music, where I think exciting action ramp-up music would now be more appropriate.
Post #1031343
- Author
- Octorox
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1031343/action/topic#1031343
- Date created
- 9-Jan-2017, 8:17 PM