Well, it’ll still be a very focused edit on this particular issue
Then I would suggest to completely remove Poe’s reaction “Our work here is done” which is too cheerful considering the situation.
For Finn’s “They have done it” you can only fix this small issue by also removing “Where is Rey ?” . I know the solution to split his reaction shot in two does not work. Or is it possible to replace “They have done it” with “Where is Rey ?”. Hum… not sure…