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Post #1031039

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MalàStrana
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
9-Jan-2017, 8:12 AM

Hal 9000 said:

There will be an eventual V2

For reinserting deleted scenes I guess ? I hope you also will trim a few things here and there (Not so gentle restructure edition). The RLM review gave a few ideas which are worth taking into consideration imho (such as the comedy bits that take too much place and should be trimmed a little and other forced friendship reactions that don’t feel natural at all between Rey/Finn and Finn/Poe).
Also I wonder if Rey’s Force vision shouldn’t be splitted in two: first part as we know it, at Maz, the second part after when Ben Solo unlocks her mind, because there clearly lacks a “in between” moment when she tries twice in a row the Jedi Mind Trick. It could smoother the “WTF ?” issue of the scene.