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Post #1026919

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Jeebus
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If you need to B*tch about something... this is the place
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Date created
31-Dec-2016, 10:39 PM

suspiciouscoffee said:

Lol there’s a guy at my school trying to be a rapper. He’s got a YouTube channel with his awful music videos. His “songs” feature such poetic lyrics like:

“Workin’ hard like a hard worker. Green on green like a farm worker.”

and my personal favorite
"Pb&J, can’t resist me like a plain bag of Lay’s."

The PBnJ line is funny, but the line before it is just awful. It’s lyrically lazy, you can’t rhyme a word with itself, that’s like the number 1 rule of rapping.