I most definitely would vote for crawl #1, with one minor alteration:
-change “friend” to “ally” as previously suggested.
I quite like the use of the word “dastardly”, I think it describes Krennic’s character far better than cunning.
I most definitely would vote for crawl #1, with one minor alteration:
-change “friend” to “ally” as previously suggested.
I quite like the use of the word “dastardly”, I think it describes Krennic’s character far better than cunning.