darthrush said:
It’s pretty good. I think that imperial scientist works best as Galen’s description. What I’m getting from all these crawls is that the first paragraph establishes the tyranny of the Empire since the Jedi have fallen. The second paragraph has varied for everyone. And the third paragraph explains how Krennic is searching for Galen.
True, science officer makes it sound too much like Star Trek, I feel stupid for not noticing that beforehand haha