Thanks, Mr. Freeman! I had already done a lot of that, but that gave me lots of good ideas I had never thought of before. It is especially useful beginning the scene with the council as they are talking about Dooku; that way, Padme doesn't have to come up with a suspicious statement out of the blue, just to introduce the character. Very good stuff.

As for the crawl matching the line in the movie, I realize that that is somewhat odd. How about SHADOW OF THE DARK SIDE?

Jeten San Hett, perhaps if you can't find a server, you could split it up into several .rar files, and email each piece to me separately? But before that happens, I just want to finalize the title and the crawl.