Good pick on "Shroud of the Darkside." My ONLY reservation with it is that the title is mentioned in the film, which doesn't happen in any of the other films, and cam sometimes come off as a bit odd.

On the opening scroll, you seem to be keeping it as close to the original as possible, but I think "star systems" is more appropriate than "solar systems." I don't know why Lucas didn't think of this, as SOLar systems refers to our star, Sol. Also, would you consider working a line in there to convey its been 10 years since the last movie?