A very minor tweak is required for 100% Line up of Rogue One and Star Wars (A new Hope)
“Several Transmissions were Beamed aboard this ship, I want to know what happened to the plans they sent you?” Original
“Several Transmissions were Beamed aboard a ship, I want to know what happened to the plans they sent you?” Fixed
That’s not the original line. The original line is “Several transmissions were beamed to this ship by rebel spies. I want to know what happened to the plans they sent you.”
Plus, your “fix” actually makes less sense because Vader goes from using the indefinite article “a,” which would suggest that he’s not sure he has the right ship, to insisting that he knows Leia is the one who received the plans.