I will give specific suggestions as soon as I can re: establishing the impact of Anakin's dream.
But regarding the opening scroll issue -- You must have thought of this already, but I have to ask why can't you just use the opening scroll from MagFan's "The Clone War"? I guess I would like this because I really like MagFan's work on "Balance of the Force" but suspect your Episode II cut will supercede his in my book.
You have to admit, "The Clone War" is a pretty kick-ass title. Is it really out of the question?