Ah actually that works really well. There is a major reason because R2-D2 get’s stuck on something and then he suddenly jumps to the window.
What I would suggest here is Slowing it down slightly and loop the rain sound effect.
What is happening with Vaders voice!!! Sounds good although what’s the plan give him subtitles or something?
Anyway a bit slower and if you can Spot match the color it would be 100% sold.