-The camera pans UP after the opening scroll, while in all the other films it pans DOWN. Would it be possible to flip things in a way the camera could indeed pan down?
-Corde's line "I've failed you" makes no sense. It was pretty much her job to die in Amidala's place, so that should be cut.
-When Padme arrives in Palpatine's office, Yoda tells her "Seeing you alive, brings warm feelings to my heart." Besides just being really awkward, Padme totally ignores him! So that should be cut.
-Also, Padme just comes out and says "I think Count Dooku was behind it." Um...why would she think that? She offers NO motive. Of course this is to set up Count Dooku's character in the absense of the Lost 20 scene (which hopefully Lucas will restore in a future release), so I'm not sure what can be done with this.
Oh, and I reiterate "Dark Force Rising." The Sith are warping the force as the dark side gains more power, Palpatine gets one step closer to Emperor, and the future army of the Empire is created. A perfect title.