Yes, it seems to be better ! About that shot in particular (but I understand the point is to build a global correction for the scene), I would be tempted to reduce a little the green cast : http://screenshotcomparison.com/comparison/189370/picture:0.
Perhaps my version is a little too blue and has a wrong contrast and I don’t know how would that change fit for the hole scene. What do you think ?
Sorry for nitpicking, your work is amazing ! 😉