Post #100155

Author: Bossk
Parent topic: Star Wars haikus
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/100155/action/topic#100155
Date created: 7-Apr-2005, 4:48 AM

Last line had six... Mil-en-i-um-Fal-con

Chaltab, your middle line ("Are rousing much ire in me") has 8 in it as well... are-rous-ing-much-i-re-in-me

Lose the "much".