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- #911638
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- SPACE COP 2016 (THE EPISODE IV SAVED IN EDITING EDIT) (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/911638/action/topic#911638
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Hi there bishabosha,
Thanks for the feedback. You wrote: “I think some important things were cut also, such as Space Cop noticing the metal alloy…” You’re right it is actually an important sub-plot. The reason I cut it out was because of the fart joke in the head alien’s office. It was just too crude for my taste. But Spacecop noticing the Chromotanium poster was intertwined with the joke. In the following scene at the strip club Mike and Rich discuss the Chromotanium and so the cuts therefore went even deeper. One scene later though Mike redeems the situation by mentioning the company’s name, Aliun technologies or somesuch, so it shows that he had cottoned on to the underhanded goings on. As a compensation I tried to implement my own fart joke. When Rich shoots Jay after the foot chase, I inserted a fart sound. The idea being that the stun setting on the laser blaster also loosens one’s bowels. There’s even an incidental reaction shot of Mike as if he is reacting to the fart. I know its little compensation for cutting out the original fart joke, but I tried 😃
Anyhow thanks once again for the feedback and thank you for appreciating my efforts.
Greetings