I like the first example where u just added some light around the edges and the red line. I dont think the whole screen should change in color. and the better noise screen is good too! Maybe it could be replaced by something 'laser-ish' (like the screen in ANH:R when the rebels are looking at the death star plans)
Question for Ady: Will you be adding any diologue from the radio drama? I listened to it today and there were a few lines I liked that could fit in well. (ie: During the lightsaber duel when Darth Vader says to Luke that he's not a Jedi yet. Luke says "You ceased to be one a long time ago.") Since the camera angle is from behind Luke, he could say that as he's walking up the stairs. Theres quite a few little things like that I found to be interesting in the radio drama.
What's everyone elses take on this?