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- Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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Originally posted by: heroesfate
Goodmusician,
I enjoyed where you are going with the Yoda/Qui-Gon meditation scene. I think it is very effective to combine the inclusion of Qui-Gon with Yoda's understanding of the prophecy. I especially liked how Yoda could barely just reach far enough into the future to just catch a glimpse of the adult Luke Skywalker, almost on the "fringes" of Yoda's ability to see the future. Very interesting concept..especially in light of Yoda talking with Luke in ESB about seeing the future, nice to get a glimpse of Yoda actually doing so. Great work!!
Goodmusician,
I enjoyed where you are going with the Yoda/Qui-Gon meditation scene. I think it is very effective to combine the inclusion of Qui-Gon with Yoda's understanding of the prophecy. I especially liked how Yoda could barely just reach far enough into the future to just catch a glimpse of the adult Luke Skywalker, almost on the "fringes" of Yoda's ability to see the future. Very interesting concept..especially in light of Yoda talking with Luke in ESB about seeing the future, nice to get a glimpse of Yoda actually doing so. Great work!!
I'm going to have to disagree with this opinion. It's very jarring to cut to. That goes with all the clips actually; it might lend better to dissolve between them, seeming like a vision more than Yoda watching a movie in his mind. This also goes with continuously cutting back out to Yoda. With the dream shots we've seen before it's easily understood that we're seeing what Yoda sees. Cutting in and out is too much (aside frome maybe the first instance). Also, we see Bail enter way too soon. Actually we don't need to see him enter even. Just have the images be building, up to the Vader arm clawing up, then Bail's interuption breaks the vision.
Small other comment: While acceptable, the first 3 visions resemble a trailer more than a vision pertaining to the audio. Maybe visions of young Ani? The clones have nothing to do with the prophecy of the Chosen One.