Ryan McAvoy said:
I'm having another go at this project. I'm coming up to the half/third mark and have just done the scene in Obi Wan's home. I've recut the sequence in the original aka Adywan's order. I've cut it slightly differently to Adywan's version in a few shots and added a small deleted shot of Luke at the end...
(^ Click image to watch video)
^ Bare in mind that although the video is finished, the audio is just temporary and I will be replacing all the music (e.g. the new music won't step all over Luke's new final line).
What happened to the earlier crawl?
Also, the early scripts had the title card read "A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away an incredible adventure took place..."
And if I may ask, how much are you relying on the 4th and revised 4th draft for your work with regards to this? I know both Deleted Magic and Star Wars Begins relied heavily on them.
Great project, btw. I can't wait to see your finished version.