Jurassic World is example of film being a mixed bag in my opinion. Despite have some fun action scenes, decent performances and a pretty cool looking park, the film suffered from a weak story with pointless subplots, motiveless characters, a stereotypical villain, and way too much CGI in scenes that could’ve used practical effects. While I do think it’s better than The Lost World: Jurassic Park and Jurassic Park III, it’s nowhere near on the same level as the original film.
So, after having recently rewatched Jurassic World, I decided to fix its plot and characters by doing a rewrite of its plot and characters. Although I didn’t change a whole lot, there are some major differences in my rewrite of it.
That said, I have done two things with this rewrite. The first being a simple plot rewrite, the second, a feature length screenplay adapted from that plot rewrite.
Any and all feedback, whether it be positive or negative, is welcome:
Plot rewrite: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jhkssprU2xKLGdLkqUXKQCJIJIt02rduXdlbpgBWG-U/edit