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#424564
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Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side (the TM edit) (Released)
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I really like were this discussion has been heading. It feels like Qui-gon was kinda of a sure thing when George was making the prequels, he needs to be an important character after death just the way Obi one was in the original trilogy; but now heard of but not seen directly.

And I'm glad your back to this TM, I share the enthusiasm of MTHaslett, but I'm sure you knew that. About cutting the bar shot of the smoke rising....I would definitely not cut it. I do not at all feel like you compromised the feel of star wars. It feels...old....it just feels right, obviously I don't have the right words, but I would hate to see it go.

 

 

 

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#416046
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SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *)
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Wow, that really adds to the scene. If I saw that in theaters, I would have felt a little fear. Fantastic.

The only thing I would do is to have the lights flicker a bit before they power down, kinda like an electrical problem. And maybe have a few of those buttons go a little haywire. Perhaps an even more ominous deep boom as the lights come down.

 

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#415751
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SW Episode III - Reign of the Dark Side (* unfinished project *)
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BobGarcia, I've been following you for awhile, first on youtube (as Mrspartansmith) And I'm very impressed. I think you can take the story further than you already are, I think you have great talent as an editor. In a way you remind me of tropperman, though you probably don't know who he is...yet lol.

I will try to contribute as much feedback as I can to help you in the creative process. I also now feel G. Grievous is well, rather Devious...good stuff. I'll comment on the mace duel soon.

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#394545
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STAR WARS: EP V &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - <strong>12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW</strong>
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Darth Solo said:

Josh said:

I thought those flaps looked really cool, but a little distracting. Maybe I'm just not used to them ;]

Oh my, you have some growing to do Joshy. When your older you'll find them really facinating!!

I'll stop now.

 I kinda like it when you call me joshy.... I'll stop now. Anyways, maybe the flaps could be made a little smaller , move faster; but the effect looked pretty real!

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#392621
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Info &amp; Ideas: ESB and ROTJ Wishlist
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As I'm sure you all know the Returning to Jedi, (and I have talked about this, with a wonderful mockup by vaderios a while back) I wanted to see what it looked like edited in. And it's....something lol.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-T_L3RMxa3k

It's not very good, there are no effects and just lightsaber sounds I added in. I did add a surprise at the begginging though because I like it better that way; Faster more intence! I also made the fight slightly quicker in lightsaber hits, but you won't notice because it like a few frames here and there. One more thing, when luke hits those blue panels with his saber, they react a little.

And I kinda like your idea up there Bingo.

Oh, I also masked out the lightsaber flashes going through the stairs and vader.

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#389762
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STAR WARS: EP V &quot;REVISITED EDITION&quot;<strong>ADYWAN</strong> - <strong>12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW</strong>
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I'm sorry I have not said anything much lately, but what's there to add:

Fur=OMG! I did't expect it to look that good!

Luke Clip=OMG

Insert Ric olie jokes and vaderios mockups and here we are! See I wasn't missed. Jk

I really can't wait to see how the wampa turns out, and sorry for everything that has happened to you, and I happy for all the good things(like the moniter) Vaderios, your mockups make me pee rainbows, I liked that train video, looks like it has good elements for hoth!

There, I'm caught up. Did I miss anything?

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#386920
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The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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Well, I tried editing the Duel between Mace and Palpatine, and there are alot of sound problems, as well as crossfade issues. But:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JrtCURDLxwg

I re-edited the sequence of events to when anakin arrives 

The conversation between mace and palps in as follows-Mace: In the name of the Galactic senete of the republic, (blah blah blah)

Palpatine: I am the Senete!

Mace: We'll decide your fate (then)

Palpatine: Are you threatning me master jedi- (he stands up)

Mace: Not yet

Palpatine: It's treason then.

Well, I think it works. The rest of the changes you may or may not notice. Little stuff like making palpatine less whiney at then end. I tried to recolor Agen's saber, but I gave up. My editing skills are no match for some of you out there but, hey, I tried.

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#386224
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Episode II: Shroud of the Dark Side (the TM edit) (Released)
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Trooperman said:

Here's a quick list of changes I made a couple of weeks ago.  I think, if made, this would get the movie in at least a watchable condition.

 

I agree with Erik 100%, and in fact that's the only thing I can think of to solve the problem.  (That was point 10 on my list)

 

I will continue to add to this list as we go along, and I think it'll be easier now that we're all getting to be on the same page:

 

 

 

 

1. Put in Spence as Anakin instead of me.  His voice is more similar to Hayden's, but a lot better.

Have you guys made any definite plans? I still likes your voice though, but can't wait to here Spence!

 

2. Try Tim for Jar-Jar.  I still like the idea of Australian Jar-Jar, but we already know from Tim's video tests that he has a good setup and that it would be convincing.

Yes. But I liked Jar Jar's new lines, keep them.

 

3. Mix the music, effects, and dialogue at a consistent volume throughout.

Definitly!

 

4. Add LFE to the movie (from a technical standpoint, a piece of cake.  What someone could do, actually, is go through the movie and list all the points @ which the bass could use a good kick.  Giving me a list including minutes and seconds, like 44:32, for instance, would make it happen faster).  

I will look around, there are a lot of places really, alot of things sounded very soft, but as you said, not hard to fix.

 

5. Remove the 2 Wrath of Khan cues from the asteroid belt (replaced by no scoring).  

+

 

6. Put the original kid's voice for Boba Fett back in.  It's not that big a deal.  We can make it through a couple bad lines.  New voice only distracts.

Noooooooooo! I thought you did a great job on him, though some parts were iffy, I liked it. Cause as it stood before, it sounded like he had a mental problem when he tried to talk. Maybe it could get re recorded by you, or someone else.

 

7. Do the rest of Windu's saber shots (I actually forget how I did that, I'll need to read up again).

Yes. Maybe you could have someone do it for you who's more experienced.

 

8. Somehow swap out the Independence Day shots for new Star Wars dogfight shots? (This is a tough one.  Adywan is the only one I know who could do something like that, but he's busy with his own project).  

I new exactly what you were going for when you tried to do that, but that its not going to be usable lol. It's like watching Star strek and all of the sudden you see x wings fighting Ties. I would'nt know of how to go about fixing it, sorry.

 

9. Change the music as Anakin and Padme are flying into Geonosis.

Agree. 

 

10. Somehow fix the "Disappearing Anakin" continuity error at the end.  This is a major problem but I don't really know a good way to fix it.  I painted myself into a corner.  I wish I had a shot of all 3 characters in frame, but obviously I don't because the whole scenario was never part of AOTC.  One thing I could do, that's coming to me as I write this, is perhaps splice in quick close-ups of Anakin with the saber over his head (from the previous duel with Dooku), just to remind the audience that he's still there.  I don't really know.  Can anyone else solve this puzzle?

Ponder on this I will.

 

11. Try and make Owen's voice mesh better with the character onscreen.  Right now he has the same symptom that my Anakin does. 

 

Agreed.

 

12. Rerecord Mas Amedda with better equipment.  Same actor, hairyhen.  

Agreed.

 

13. Finish the sound effects for the final battle and mix in the trooper voices more smoothly, especially when the troopers first arrive (really, the sound there should be mostly ship sounds and lasers and explosions, not a bunch of voices all at once.  They're too exposed).

Agreed. 

 

14. A couple of shots that look too soft: (could you look for these)

?

 

15. Maybe remove the extreme close up of Boba when Jango's head is cut off.  Maybe replace it with something else.

Keep, works well emotionaly, by the way, was that a different actor? 

 

16. Do something about the Blade Runner shots in the cantina.  The really long one, in particular, is probably too recognizable, and there's a frame rate issue with a couple shots.

 

I guess.

 

17. The music as Jar-Jar is proposing his great idea in the Senate might need to be replaced (especially the end, followed by the original music picking up- this sounds awkward).  

K

 

18. The "Obi-Wan Kenobi- hand him over to me now" line makes it too long with the camera pointed at the ceiling.  Too stylized for Star Wars.  Maybe I'll shorten the line, or cut the shot out all together.  This scene is not all that important- it gets us from one place to another.

Well, when I was watching that scene and the trial scene, the editing seemed a little "akward" almost confused, but maybe there is a way to fix that.

 

19. Try and rework the arena and the following battle.  Again, I may need new FX shots to do that.  

 

What kind of FX shots? The jedi arrivel and the battle needs to be slightly reworked, it kinda moved too fast, and I don't think the music works as well as it could there (was it mars or something like that) But it worked amazingly when the clone battle started!

 

20. Fix the following errors (I'll start the list):

 

-When the ship lands on Naboo, the ship and the sound of the ship are several seconds apart.

 

-After Yoda talks about the shroud of the dark side, in the shot after that, you can tell Obi-Wan is saying something, but he's not supposed to be.

 

-Fix the very first transition (the iris) and the transition after the funeral.

 

-Reduce Yoda's jerkiness- increase frame rate, but not 24 fps.  

 

21. When Windu first pulls out his saber to deflect bullets, I want to try and tighten the editing (may not be necessary)


 Well, you know me, I had to respond. I will try to help you in whatever way I can, I can't wait till I have a finished copy in my hands someday, either from you, or an edit inspired by you! I have more to add but i will save that for later.

(By the way, is it just me or when dooku rips off that thing from the wall to throw at anakin, the shot needs to be flipped, it almost looks like it comes from the wrong direction.