I like it, good job. I definitely think the shot of the AT-AT firing should be flipped horizontally, I think that would greatly improve the scene.
I think that if you flip the shot then it won’t make sense. It is meant to look like Finn’s right speeder wing gets hit so you would expect an AT AT to be shooting from that angle.
Watching it again I see what you mean. I was thinking that it would better match the direction Finn looks, and the angle the scene is shot at in general. Works either way though.
That is a good point in regards to the angle that the whole scene is shot in. The only issue is you see the shuttle for Kylo right next to the AT-AT and if you flip the shot then his shuttle is in the wrong place. I will try cropping it out and then if that works, I think I will implement your suggestion for the sake of visual flow 😃
I think it’s the shot of the targeting computer that’s throwing it off. Because the screen shows the speeder from behind, but the AT-AT fires from the front. If the targeting computers screen mimicked the viewpoint of the AT-AT, it would make the transition between the different angles much smoother, and easier to quickly orient yourself. But without making new animations for the screen, this is somewhat unavoidable.
Overall though, this is really working for me. Great work!