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Poita has had to deal with evacuating from brushfires last week, and health issues this week. He’s going to be offline for a few days at least.
Ok
The main problem with the CG Yoda is that it looks nothing like OT Yoda.
It looks more like OT Yoda then AotC and RotS CGI Yoda.
Agree
How about make the imperial capitol courrsuant?
Here what i would say in the crawl.
Episode 6 Revenge of The Jedi
The Rebellion Needs Han Solo To Survive! Meanwhile Vader and The Empire Are Searching to the end of the galaxy for Luke Skywalker after he slipped thorough the Fingers Of Lord Vader.
2 Months After The Shocking betrayal at the hands of Lando Calrissian. Luke Skywalker has returned to his home planet of Tatooine and is Waiting for The arrival of the Millennium Falcon. Luke Skywalker and The Rebellion had just finished there preparations to rescue the charming Han Solo from
The Evil Gangster Jaba the Hutt…The number and paragraphs and paragraph structure is way off, I know that RotJ was the one whose crawl diverged the most from the traditional style, but this is too much.
This isn’t a final Draft this is just a pitch so he can get a general idea.
HerekittykittyX said:
Heres a suggestion pan down to space falcon landing on Tatooine. Wipe to luke building his lightsaber, and then c3po and r2d2 go off to jabas palace.You have no idea how much I hate the Luke saber scene. It ruins his great reveal later on in the movie, as well as not really serving a purpose in the story.
This.
Honestly, I don’t understand why people are so enamoured with this scene.
Because people go nuts over deleted scenes, no matter how poorly done or why they were deleted in the first place.
This for the most part, although I will say about this scene specifically I really like the bit where Vader talks to Luke via ForceTime.
Agree that is why i like that scene.
Here what i would say in the crawl.
Episode 6 Revenge of The Jedi
The Rebellion Needs Han Solo To Survive! Meanwhile Vader and The Empire Are Searching to the end of the galaxy for Luke Skywalker after he slipped thorough the Fingers Of Lord Vader.
2 Months After The Shocking betrayal at the hands of Lando Calrissian. Luke Skywalker has returned to his home planet of Tatooine and is Waiting for The arrival of the Millennium Falcon. Luke Skywalker and The Rebellion had just finished there preparations to rescue the charming Han Solo from
The Evil Gangster Jaba the Hutt…
My opinion on deleted scenes unless it pushes the overall story don’t put it in the movie.
If You do force awakens you can’t dance around han and ben
yep, the one I watched had several typos or misspellings.
Ok I’ll send the crawl through you guys.
Update i got the first 10 minutes done working on the crawl for sith.
How should I open the film? I want the first moment to be 3PO and R2 going through the desert, but I don’t know how to transition from space to that?
Obviously after the crawl it’s going to pan down to Tatooine, but I don’t know what ship should be flying towards it? Maybe an X-Wing and the Falcon, but I feel like showing the Falcon in the opening shot would be a mistake. I don’t know.
I’m also working on a trailer. Here’s a shot from it:
Heres a suggestion pan down to space falcon landing on Tatooine. Wipe to luke building his lightsaber, and then c3po and r2d2 go off to jabas palace.
Damn! This looks amazing I was Aways a huge fan of Gary Kurtz orignal idea for return of the jedi.
I’d guess 29 for Ash.
Yep! Good “guess.” 😉
Wow! Do me! Do me!
31 is my guess
Yes Yes
Where are my lips, because they are not
I lost and left
I have left the water to be lucky
I said my lips
I do not want to know thatYes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?I committed suicide
I have a naked mother
I have left the water to be lucky
I thought that was meYes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
I do not want my name where you see me, right?Yes, yes, I do not want a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
You do not want to go homeYes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?I killed people
I also had a baby
Bad water
It’s meI said my lips
I’m going to the internet
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?Yes Yes
I do not want to make a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
Yes, I do not want to be a person
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
Yes Yes
Where are my lips, because they are not
I lost and left
I have left the water to be lucky
I said my lips
I do not want to know thatYes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?I committed suicide
I have a naked mother
I have left the water to be lucky
I thought that was meYes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
I do not want my name where you see me, right?Yes, yes, I do not want a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
You do not want to go homeYes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?I killed people
I also had a baby
Bad water
It’s meI said my lips
I’m going to the internet
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?Yes Yes
I do not want to make a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
Yes, I do not want to be a person
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
Does it matter if it is?
Does this thread matter?
Do we matter?
How can trees matter if our eyes don’t matter?
Are we all just a high tech computer simulation inside Frink’s massive Apple ][ hard drives? Our only purpose to give him the simulation of pain and suffering?
Wow that’s deep
Make the first half revenge and revial and add a transition 23 years later then pick up with the rebels episodes.
I don’t need your screenshots, you are obviously playing or trolling. You ask about something you already know, then you pretend that darthsolo was banned before you join this forum (so why asking about someone you don’t ever know ?), then you change your story one more time.
And now you loose your punctuation again.So please one last time: don’t play or troll with such serious matters. Please.
I Am Not Lying at all i Didn’t start becoming active until late November/Early December.
Also after i said why did DarthSolo get banned as soon as i said that Jeebus replied with PM’D.
If you want more evidence I’ll pm you ZigZig.
Flippin Groundhogs Day all over again, yet something is slightly difforento.
Oh carp I just posted in the insignificant tread.
Why was darth solo banned?
He claimed his daughter died in a terrorist attack (I think…it could have been a natural disaster, don’t recall specifically). The staff felt (rightly so IMO) that they had enough evidence that he was lying to ban him.
I hope they were right. Would be horrible to loose your child and then be banned from a place you like because the Mods don’t believe you.
Yeah but i think he was lying he did threaten mods that he would skin them alive.
Why did you ask the reason of darthsolo’s ban ? It seems that you remember the whole story…
It is not very clever to stir such a shit. For European people like me, recent terrorist attacks in Manchester, Paris or Brussels deserve more restraint and respect.
And more punctuation.
I don’t remember the story becuase i joined after the Fact. I got a PM explaining everything!
You joined more than 4 months before the fact. Could you please stop lying about such a serious matter?
Ok i made my account 4 months before i only used it for despecailzed then in December i became active and i didn’t know this happened at all im not lying i will send you a screen shot.
Kitty I know this is a little off-topic but is English your first language? No offense intended.
Yes English is my first language.
Was I high or low?
Also mine would be too easy to “guess” by going through my post history from the last 2-3 weeks.
Low. My actully age is 15
Snooker i am going to predict you are 28 years old.
Why?
Idk just a random guess
I’m calling 14 for Kitty.
Close
Snooker i am going to predict you are 28 years old.
…what?
So the idea is to predict how old you are
I think it would be fun to predict how old are you are just from what you have posted.
