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#1174154
Topic
Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit)
Time

snooker said:

darthrush said:

Wouldn’t it be a good idea to take most of the Crawl establishing the imperial capitol and why the rebellion might destroy it and give more information on that end of the story? Considering you probably will be lacking for elaboration upon their attack in the regular film. Which kind of brings me to a question, what do you plan to do with the briefing scene? That could be a place to help lay out some expositon.

The rebel briefing scene will have General Madine dubbed over explaining that there is a major Imperial Weapons Depot on the forest moon of Endor. Successfully attacking this base will both be a major setback for Imperial Forces in the outer Rim as well as supply the rebellion with an extensive weapons supply for the foreseeable future.

Perhaps after the sheild generator blows up a whole bunch of rebel transports go down to the surface to aquire weapons and recover the remaining ground attack force. Madine could have his own cruiser just so he can have some exposition like “The shield is down, send the transports” or something, so that the rebellion has a minor victory.

The vfx of the gr75’s should be easy enough.

Keep in mind that there will be no attack on the capital in this film. It is simply where the Emperor sequence happens.

Wouldn’t be a Little blade runnerish ending

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#1173865
Topic
Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit)
Time

Zachary VIII said:

HerekittykittyX said:

Here what i would say in the crawl.

Episode 6 Revenge of The Jedi

The Rebellion Needs Han Solo To Survive! Meanwhile Vader and The Empire Are Searching to the end of the galaxy for Luke Skywalker after he slipped thorough the Fingers Of Lord Vader.

2 Months After The Shocking betrayal at the hands of Lando Calrissian. Luke Skywalker has returned to his home planet of Tatooine and is Waiting for The arrival of the Millennium Falcon. Luke Skywalker and The Rebellion had just finished there preparations to rescue the charming Han Solo from
The Evil Gangster Jaba the Hutt…

The number and paragraphs and paragraph structure is way off, I know that RotJ was the one whose crawl diverged the most from the traditional style, but this is too much.

This isn’t a final Draft this is just a pitch so he can get a general idea.

Post
#1173857
Topic
Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit)
Time

DominicCobb said:

TV’s Frink said:

DuracellEnergizer said:

snooker said:

HerekittykittyX said:
Heres a suggestion pan down to space falcon landing on Tatooine. Wipe to luke building his lightsaber, and then c3po and r2d2 go off to jabas palace.

You have no idea how much I hate the Luke saber scene. It ruins his great reveal later on in the movie, as well as not really serving a purpose in the story.

This.

Honestly, I don’t understand why people are so enamoured with this scene.

Because people go nuts over deleted scenes, no matter how poorly done or why they were deleted in the first place.

This for the most part, although I will say about this scene specifically I really like the bit where Vader talks to Luke via ForceTime.

Agree that is why i like that scene.

Post
#1173847
Topic
Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit)
Time

Here what i would say in the crawl.

Episode 6 Revenge of The Jedi

The Rebellion Needs Han Solo To Survive! Meanwhile Vader and The Empire Are Searching to the end of the galaxy for Luke Skywalker after he slipped thorough the Fingers Of Lord Vader.

2 Months After The Shocking betrayal at the hands of Lando Calrissian. Luke Skywalker has returned to his home planet of Tatooine and is Waiting for The arrival of the Millennium Falcon. Luke Skywalker and The Rebellion had just finished there preparations to rescue the charming Han Solo from
The Evil Gangster Jaba the Hutt…

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#1173312
Topic
Revenge of the Jedi (The Snooker edit)
Time

snooker said:

How should I open the film? I want the first moment to be 3PO and R2 going through the desert, but I don’t know how to transition from space to that?

Obviously after the crawl it’s going to pan down to Tatooine, but I don’t know what ship should be flying towards it? Maybe an X-Wing and the Falcon, but I feel like showing the Falcon in the opening shot would be a mistake. I don’t know.

I’m also working on a trailer. Here’s a shot from it:

Heres a suggestion pan down to space falcon landing on Tatooine. Wipe to luke building his lightsaber, and then c3po and r2d2 go off to jabas palace.

Post
#1172856
Topic
How Many Quoted Posts Can We Get? Make The Posts Look Weird As Possible!
Time

DuracellEnergizer said:

Yes Yes

Where are my lips, because they are not
I lost and left
I have left the water to be lucky
I said my lips
I do not want to know that

Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?

I committed suicide
I have a naked mother
I have left the water to be lucky
I thought that was me

Yes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
I do not want my name where you see me, right?

Yes, yes, I do not want a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
You do not want to go home

Yes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?

I killed people
I also had a baby
Bad water
It’s me

I said my lips
I’m going to the internet
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?

Yes Yes
I do not want to make a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
Yes, I do not want to be a person
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home

Yes Yes

Where are my lips, because they are not
I lost and left
I have left the water to be lucky
I said my lips
I do not want to know that

Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?

I committed suicide
I have a naked mother
I have left the water to be lucky
I thought that was me

Yes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
I do not want my name where you see me, right?

Yes, yes, I do not want a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
You do not want to go home

Yes Yes Yes
He came
Do not confuse the confusion
sleep
They are dressed as stupid
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?

I killed people
I also had a baby
Bad water
It’s me

I said my lips
I’m going to the internet
Do you not know my name, where do you find it?

Yes Yes
I do not want to make a man for me
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home
Yes, I do not want to be a person
Yes, yes, they did not want to come home

Post
#1172600
Topic
Lets try to predict your age thread?
Time

Dek Rollins said:

TV’s Frink said:

Does it matter if it is?

Does this thread matter?

Do we matter?

How can trees matter if our eyes don’t matter?

Are we all just a high tech computer simulation inside Frink’s massive Apple ][ hard drives? Our only purpose to give him the simulation of pain and suffering?

Wow that’s deep

Post
#1172599
Topic
Maul: A Star Wars Story
Time

Make the first half revenge and revial and add a transition 23 years later then pick up with the rebels episodes.

Post
#1172449
Topic
Why was this user banned? thread.
Time

ZigZig said:

I don’t need your screenshots, you are obviously playing or trolling. You ask about something you already know, then you pretend that darthsolo was banned before you join this forum (so why asking about someone you don’t ever know ?), then you change your story one more time.
And now you loose your punctuation again.

So please one last time: don’t play or troll with such serious matters. Please.

I Am Not Lying at all i Didn’t start becoming active until late November/Early December.
Also after i said why did DarthSolo get banned as soon as i said that Jeebus replied with PM’D.

If you want more evidence I’ll pm you ZigZig.

Post
#1172428
Topic
Why was this user banned? thread.
Time

ZigZig said:

HerekittykittyX said:

ZigZig said:

HerekittykittyX said:

Darth Solo said:

Flippin Groundhogs Day all over again, yet something is slightly difforento.

Oh carp I just posted in the insignificant tread.

Why was darth solo banned?

HerekittykittyX said:

ray_afraid said:

TV’s Frink said:

He claimed his daughter died in a terrorist attack (I think…it could have been a natural disaster, don’t recall specifically). The staff felt (rightly so IMO) that they had enough evidence that he was lying to ban him.

I hope they were right. Would be horrible to loose your child and then be banned from a place you like because the Mods don’t believe you.

Yeah but i think he was lying he did threaten mods that he would skin them alive.

Why did you ask the reason of darthsolo’s ban ? It seems that you remember the whole story…

It is not very clever to stir such a shit. For European people like me, recent terrorist attacks in Manchester, Paris or Brussels deserve more restraint and respect.

And more punctuation.

I don’t remember the story becuase i joined after the Fact. I got a PM explaining everything!

You joined more than 4 months before the fact. Could you please stop lying about such a serious matter?

Ok i made my account 4 months before i only used it for despecailzed then in December i became active and i didn’t know this happened at all im not lying i will send you a screen shot.

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