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#1051463
Topic
Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut)
Time

Jeebus said:

These are some mock-ups I did on how to handle that scene;

A much more subtle approach

I think that one’s pretty chilling and cool, but the audience misses out on Vader’s reaction to Padme’s death.

This one includes Vader’s reaction, but uses a different scream

Right now I’m downloading the Anti-Cheese edits to see how Jeremy handles the scene, I’ll try to update with a clip of it once it’s downloaded.

EDIT:

Another alternate scream from the man behind the Anti-Cheese Edits

From the Anti-Cheese Edit’s official release, no scream at all. Well, maybe a minor scream but it’s mostly drowned out by the building crumbling.

Soooooo am I the only one who laughed when they heard that scream? lol cringe-worthy.

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#1050081
Topic
Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut)
Time

Mithrandir said:

The only complaint I’d have with the inclusion of the line from rebels is the part that says “I destroyed him”. Within the context of the movie, and having watched ObiWan basically defeat and humilliate Vader only 10 minutes before, that part of the line sounds as Anakin rationalizing and making up for his failure in his mind.

But answering Anakin Skywalker was weak alone isn’t complete neither.

I remember there was a video made by TheCutter where he used another line that, when asked “anakin, can you hear me” went more or less like “that name no longer has any meaning for me. Now I know the power of the dark side” (and started crushing things). Perhaps if you added “anakin skywalker was weak” instead of the line borrowed from ROTJ could preserve the meaning and loose the pretension of Vader having the psicological structures of a weak person (esencially saying he won when he clearly lost).

But that’s what narcissists do… they rationalize their failures… live in alternate reality. They manipulate the truth… which I feel gives Vader so much depth as a character. Just my opinion… and I actually edited a version usind The Cutter’s line as well, as an alternative - check it out here https://vimeo.com/161839414

I think there are multiple ways to execute this scene without having to use the “Frankenstein breaking free” or the infamous ‘nooooooooo’ - my edits were just meant to show some possibilities given the material we have to work with. If they help or influence anyone’s edit, sounds great to me!

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#1049458
Topic
Revenge of the Sith (The New Canon Cut)
Time

NFBisms said:

This is a big one, thanks to ImperialFighter for the suggestion in a private topic, but I think I’m doing away with the Darth Vader scream of anguish, improved LoE version or not. The Vader awakens sequence is very different now, and I used an idea I got from a re-edit of the scene on Vimeo that I saw a few months ago but can’t seem to find anymore. But basically, it goes:

P: Anakin. Can you hear me?

DV: … Anakin Skywalker was weak… I destroyed him.

Using Star Wars Rebels audio. I just think it goes by too fast and is abrupt, so I’d really like to hear if people want it in, or suggestions and ideas on how to improve it.

I’m actually the editor of that scene on vimeo 😃 - nice to see someone taking it and running with it! I’d love to see your edit when you’re done! sounds good

Here’s a link to the clip on Vimeo for reference: https://vimeo.com/183048045

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#1047276
Topic
Star Wars Deleted Scenes - Reincorporated?
Time

team_negative1 said:

Here is another test scene with Darth Vader, there was a huge sequence with 4-5 frames of dirt covering 1/3 frame, and it seems to skip around the 26 second mark, along with some ghosting on the right hand side:

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Video Clip:

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http://www.dailymotion.com/video/k3uLh013FnJ9mTbG9WR

Again, we don’t have a timetable, or release schedule for any of these clips, they are just tests.

Team Negative1

A super clean version of this would be really cool to insert into a Rogue One edit. 😃

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#1040216
Topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure
Time

NeverarGreat said:

The SKB sequence is complete, as far as I’m concerned, so it’s ready for final render 😃

On another note, the final shot of the film has bothered me since my first viewing, since it weaves and bobs drunkenly. I scaled it 107% and stabilized it: https://vimeo.com/201330286
Password: stable
Full quality:
https://mega.nz/#!bUVzlQ7Y!Sw0THl1J_Wtgtrq_bbTvydGVmAgNLBph959eCgMddVs

What do you think? I know it’s not strictly related to the edit. 😃

great job on this!

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#1034998
Topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure
Time

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Maybe a different angle would work better? I think having the ship pointed directly at the planet is more intimidating… possibly breaking through the clouds with TIEs coming towards them.

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#1032598
Topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure
Time

Octorox said:

Sir Ridley said:

So here’s my take on Finn’s line “They’ve done it”, redubbing it as “They’ve found us”, including animation on the mouth to make it bite together a bit on the “us” rather than the original open mouth “it”.

https://youtu.be/IVI_sDK6SXk

What do you think?

It’s noticeably an edit but it’s done pretty well. Not quite there but definitely a start.

That’s pretty great - I think some leveling tweaks and you’ve got it. The audio seems to dip a bit on the “found” and then back up…try a subtle tweak to level the audio and I think it’ll make a big difference.

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#1031961
Topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure
Time

I, personally, think Luke and Vader in the Force vision makes more sense than Zuvio or the Knights of Ren in the vision. Talk about distracting… As viewers, we still have no idea what their relevance is to her tuning in to the Force via the saber. To me, they are just loose ends, which actually adversely affect the movie’s standalone value… but of course I understand how characters like Luke and/or Vader may take some attention away from the “main” character…

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#1031671
Topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure
Time

I think adding Vader and Luke to Rey’s force vision could be quite cool if done right. I think that was their golden opportunity to actually have Luke and Vader in TFA… something to think about for your edit. Maybe something subtle like this:

https://vimeo.com/194712291

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#1029735
Topic
Rogue One: A Star Wars Story - FanEdit Ideas <strong><em>SPOILERS</em></strong>
Time

teharri said:

I think I am alone, but the Choking on your ambitions line is growing on me.

“Be careful not to choke on your *aspirations(not ‘ambitions’), Director” – hence, the breathing pun… Aspiration: (1) a hope or ambition of achieving something (2) the action or process of drawing breath.

Although I don’t feel like the line is a grand slam, I personally am not bothered by it.

Maybe faneditors can try something more subtle…
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#1029679
Topic
Rogue One: A Star Wars Story - FanEdit Ideas <strong><em>SPOILERS</em></strong>
Time

Dat_SW_Guy said:

An Idea:
-The main crawl’s music will be “Main Title”, Take 18.
(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TzsoNlzHUsQ)
[In the beginning part, you can hear a cresendo]
Since of that cresendo, you can both mix the title card and crawl together.
And for the title card, it can be one of jack’s mockups.
(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2qt3OVPpjAs)

I’m onboard for a title card tweak. Maybe something simple like this… Untitled-1.jpg

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#1029274
Topic
Rogue One: A Star Wars Story - FanEdit Ideas <strong><em>SPOILERS</em></strong>
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IP55 said:

I would defo edit the opening.

Remove the jumping planet to planet and titles.

It definitely needs the star wars fanfare and crawl.

Remove the mind reading monster.

Corny jokes removed.

3po r2 cameo removed.

Darth vader choke, didn’t need to show his fingers. And definitely remove the “choking on your ambitions” line that was cringe worthy.

Showing Leia’s face he back was enough.

Vader’s castle removed.

Vader scene(s) removed.

All easter eggs removed.

Stardust references removed.

Soooo basically take out everything Star Wars-related and then add a crawl. Maybe we can replace the space battle with scenes from Red Tails. lol *idea for the ‘Ridiculous’ cut.

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#1028000
Topic
Rogue One: A Star Wars Story - FanEdit Ideas <strong><em>SPOILERS</em></strong>
Time

MalàStrana said:

I didn’t like the movie mostly because the rebel characters are totally inexistent and underdeveloped (and the alliance representation is lame as ever – rebels who don’t want to rebel because the Empire is too powerful… seriously…) and there is no pacing at all (I’ve never been so bored in front of a SW flick…), but the Empire is not that “damaged” (well, Krennic is too weak for someone called « director » but this is something that can be changed thanks to fanediting), so, instead of a complete reworking of the movie I would suggest to only keep (minus some modifications) the Empire material. No rebels, no Yavin IV, no Erso, nothing, except at the very end when they attack (so no “rebellion are built on hope” bullshit). Just Krennic, Tarkin, Vader, father Erso. Some kind of an one hour prologue to ANH. A few other things could be changed to reference the clone wars when the prologue starts (in an opening crawl, adding that the intro sequence is set a few years after the end of the clone wars and the foundation of the first galactic empire), and it should work. Obviously Tarkin will still be cartoonish and Vader will still be Jason Voorhees (unless the ending sequence is also removed entirely), but I believe it can save a few scenes.

Other idea: why not adding this to the end of a heavily fanedited ROTS version? Or with ROTS material used as flashbacks ?

Soooooo basically everything about it sucks (including Vader in his prime)… but adding references to the prequels OR actual prequel footage will make it better? lol yikes.

I loved RO… the only cringe-worthy moment IMO was when that slime monster came out. Other than getting rid of that thing, I’d say we wait for some of the deleted/unused footage, as I believe there will be a lot - then hopefully, we can really piece together some new versions… OR maybe just add in some ROTS footage 😉

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#1021591
Topic
Rogue One * <em>Spoilers</em> * Thread
Time

Ronster said:

A very minor tweak is required for 100% Line up of Rogue One and Star Wars (A new Hope)

“Several Transmissions were Beamed aboard this ship, I want to know what happened to the plans they sent you?” Original

“Several Transmissions were Beamed aboard a ship, I want to know what happened to the plans they sent you?” Fixed

I feel like this would be a futile ‘fix’… In RO, There was no way for Vader to know for sure which ship received the transmissions (for all he knows, they ALL could’ve gotten it), but after watching the Tantive escape so frantically/deperately, it makes sense he’d assume that was the ship that received them. This would explain the line when he catches up to them in ANH.

Moving on, does anybody else feel like a movie in between ROTS and RO would be a great spot on the timeline for a Vader movie? Possibly show him hunting down the last of the Jedi (alla The Force Unleashed) - also a good opportunity to bring back Palpatine for continuity. I quite like that RO didn’t show the Emperor, as I feel it preserves his ambiguity in ANH… but the Vader movie as a standalone would certainly need some direct “Imperial guidance” at some point for sure. This is the only spot on the timeline I can think of to make a Vader movie happen and it could be great.

Lastly, and I’m 3/4 joking when I say this… Vader’s servant on Mustafar… Secret Apprentice Snoke?? lol

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